Chapter 39 of a Fantasy novel I am currently writing. This chapter deals specially with the delusion of peace, love affairs, the struggle of a mother who lost her son, and the fate of a man who has a special ability. It deals with several things in one chapter, so it can get a little confusing introducing up to 6 characters in 4 pages. I am aware that my grammar is weak, but at the moment I am focusing on making a strong plot and creating round characters. So if you can comment on how I'm doing on that, that'll be appreciated. I'll take any suggestions for chapter name. (I know it's hard since it deals with so many things) -I hope it's not too painful to read.

a fantasy novel, which this is only one of the many chapters. Set on fantasy world. a chapter about a Seer's agony over the forthcoming destruction of her city. I'm sorry about the grammatical mistakes, but what I'm looking for right now is getting the plot and story down.