2 much crazy

too much crazy
in one place
when did it get that way?
when did it become too much?
too irreparable?
allz i know is
it did.
always the man
on the outside corners
of my dreams
watching all the action
knowing that it’s all
puff and blow
and that
he
is the real deal.
but its too much crazy
in one place
and now
it’s too late.
he is the benchmark
for soul connections and me.
it’s got to be at least that good
which seems like
way too much to ask.
(why did we hafta f this up?
being human i guess.)
you, i could take
but the ones that come along
for the ride?
oh hail no.
too much.
entirely too much.
leaving me
with not enough.
i can’t be
with someone else again
who is “close enough,”
because it isn’t.
whoever this man is
he just better blow my mind
even more than you did
so many years ago
(and yesterday)
(and just now)

 

Comments:
 
OneVoice   OneVoice wrote
on 10/4/2008 6:10:11 PM
...is it love, lust, mind blowing 'boot knockin'memories... may you find them again (smile)

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