mom says...
my greatest critic says 
it's too literal
but this verse is life and 
every once in awhile
life is too literal



Comments:
 
John_Drydin   John_Drydin wrote
on 10/31/2011 3:05:29 PM
well there ain't no room for arguin that

roadtripper523   roadtripper523 wrote
on 9/27/2011 12:49:25 PM
...so there...

whenwinwhen
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words float round my head like fireflies:brief and magnificent...
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response to tuesday too
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