this is a really powerful poem my favourite is the first stanza-the way the eyes say so much and the use of the word "twisted" just such a painful image if you were ging for strength and conflict you def got it!

Sometimes you know a relationship is not wroking out and you are just begging for your freedom. very well done.

Thanks for reading & commenting. Yeah, it's a sad one but I'm glad the strength and conflict of emotions came out too!

Loved the words and the rhyme. The feelings you had though sad were well said. No one wants to feel like this for it hurts the heart. I think you were brave to be able to write a poem like this despite the fact it hurt so much.

i can't sing worth anything, but i find myself singing this three times to be exact. it was the charm. Great writing. no feedback...just keep writing. inspirational and full of feeling. that makes all the difference in the world. i love the line...eyes that whisper...that is perfect and also with the contrast of screaming. break your spell was wonderful too. and i love the last two lines. it didnt make me sad...it invigorated, empowered me and evoked such feeling.- not sad...or angry...just strong.