Stolen Heart
I really don't know where to start,
He lent a hand but stoled my heart,
I was floating on a cloud in the sky,
I fell in love with this guy,
His sweet adorning charm,
Setting off all of my alarms,
I thought he could complete me,
I was an idiot as far as I can see,
How much of a fool am I,
To think of falling for this guy,
My smiles are running away,
Gee what else can I say,
My laughter is gone some where,
But who on Earth really cares,
I got my hopes way up on high,
Now all I do is sit and cry,
Take the heart from my chest,
Beat it into the ground like the rest,
I honestly did not want to believe,
That this once again happened to me. 

Comments:
 
mommys_angels0608   mommys_angels0608 wrote
on 4/28/2008 2:00:28 AM
Well this hit home too. As far as I can see you are a great writer and don't let anyone tell you different. Life will soon be on your side again, don't give up.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 4/27/2008 1:41:10 AM
I am sorry that you had to go through this. The pains of the heart hurt deeper than physical ones. I want to "give" you this poem I wrote titled "The Man That You Deserve". Please look for it in my writings. And remember: Above the clouds the sun still shines.

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 4/26/2008 12:44:19 PM
I feel your pain. I do hope it subsides soon and you once again feel the sun on your face.

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