Teeth marks imprinted on my lip
ill bite my lip,
so my tounge dosent slip,
and i'll try to hold on
so i dont lose my grip,
everything i've ever wanted to say is on the tip,
of my tounge,
my heart so young,
yet so sure,
that its you i need and nothing more

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vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 2/13/2009 7:51:23 PM
A small set of words filled with power! Terrific!

penname   penname wrote
on 2/13/2009 7:24:12 PM
pure joy reading this. this is in your face poetry. i really love this one. keep up the great work.

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It is only with the heart that one see's rightly; What's essential is invisible to the eye.
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