Here We Go.
Ok, here we go,
my heart beating a hundred miles a minute,
but i gotta let you know,
you're my world,
you're my breath of fresh air,
you're  my one form of bliss,
but still my greatest despair,
you have a hold on my soul,
i wish i could let you let go,
i wish i could forget all of this,
and just move on,
but if it was that damn easy,
and life was just that breezy,
you wouldn't ever shed a tear,
van gogh still would have his ear,
so how i do let you know that you are my most desirable fear,
i dont know,
but if i dont act quick,
you'll dissaper for ever,
and your picture in my brain will forever stick,
so i have my chance,
hope i dont blow it,
hope i dont get my oppurtunity and not even know it,
so please, take a look in to my soul,
take in all the reasons i could never let you go.

Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 2/27/2009 4:02:00 AM
I like this for it can stand for so many things. A lover, a thought, a skill,a hobby. To be able to write across "the lines" like this is very good.

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