Feedback people, i strive off of it.
Your image still runs rampant in my memory,
i've tried to drink it out so many times,
still it wont go away,
everytime the sunrises,
is it worth getting up,
and in the end, i do,
though i know you're not here,
i just want you back in my arms,
to have back that bliss,
it doesnt seem like much to ask,
but i know,
so many bridges to be broken,
before it will happen again,
my eyes still ache just to see you,
my skin still burns just to feel yours,
the warmth and the closeness,
no feeling in the world compares,
you are my everything,
you are why my heart beats,
i want you back in my arms,
give me a second chance to breathe 

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penname   penname wrote
on 2/14/2009 5:52:10 AM
burning skin- such an odd interesting image. this poem satiates the senses. wonderful writing. sorry i sound redundant- i dont know if these poems you write are in order of you creating them, but they get better each time.

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It is only with the heart that one see's rightly; What's essential is invisible to the eye.
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