I'll Never Know
There's something still and simple beneath what the eye can see a language that your heart speaks when you look too deep inside I cannot convey with the words I know what its like to look to the stars or feel your heart when its locked with mine when it feels were worlds apart but your eyes they hold me closer than your hands could ever do Like creeping vines that tear the tree I infest your life with insanity though I can't stand the way I am I'll break before I bend you never look away through everything you stay my heart, you never fade, my love, you never strayed.

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ttleclipse17   ttleclipse17 wrote
on 9/20/2011 8:04:06 AM
See that's the thing, everything I write has form I am not a prose poet in the least. However for some reason anything I post on hear shows up like this, I know I'm probably doing something simple wrong, but I am highly technologically lacking. Tell me how to fix it and I'll be glad to

mvvenkataraman   mvvenkataraman wrote
on 9/19/2011 10:07:18 AM
Dear respected ttleclipse17, Poetic form would be beautiful Poem is with meaning truly full But, easy to read will be better As prose form gives bad shutter. With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, mvvenkataraman SEARCH mvvenkataraman IN GOOGLE OR YAHOO

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