Thoughts.

I think of you often
Though sometimes I feel it's not enough
I disagree with your thoughts
And sometimes I wonder about your emotions
I don't understand why we're so different
When we both seem to think the same
And why sometimes I miss you
When you're really not all that far
...Just sitting across the room
But in a different time space continuum
Your mind is lost; focused on something
I most likely can't comprehend anyways...

Though sometimes I feel it's not enough,
I think of you often.

Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 12/21/2009 3:22:04 AM
So close yet so far away. Amazing that someone you love and see daily can seem to be on Mars. I like the insight you have here of this subject.

lauralee   lauralee wrote
on 12/9/2009 9:42:25 PM
yes, a different space,time continuum. perfectly stated.

frederic   frederic wrote
on 12/9/2009 1:42:38 PM
People are having so much trouble connecting these days. They have to go their own way. So, we sometimes feel we're on the outside looking in. Sensitive writing.

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