I miss you...

I wish I could spend the night holding onto you

Just to feel the soothing warmth of your skin

My toes wrapping around yours

As we drift into a quiet night of nothingness

Awakened only by sunlight gracing the window panes

And your moist kisses on my back

Telling me I’m yours forever

'Till death do us part.


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jedieh04   jedieh04 wrote
on 1/23/2009 10:39:32 PM
very well written, not anything to critic. Perfect. Love it.

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