Watching A Falling Star
   
It was cold as could be as I
was watching a falling star
so bright was he yet not to
fair falling faster than any
speeding light as if he had
not one care in the world.

Crash and burn crash and
burn watching this one
falling star yet he did not
falter as we think for he
was so bright and yet not
to fair and landing just as
he had planned all along.

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Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 5/8/2008 9:18:49 PM
I got this! :)

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