Untold
In the corner of your mind
where you weigh somethings so fine.
Ever looking so far ahead, but over looking things at hand.

Sure you have everything in full control, for
your life is neat and complete untold.

As you are ever looking so far ahead and talking your self
into doing things you your self do not really want
 to do but feel obligated to do it just the same thinking
 no one will ever know as you plan to never tell how you feel.

Comments:
 
Maddie   Maddie wrote
on 6/10/2009 7:59:20 PM
i like it, keep writing :]

kt6550   kt6550 wrote
on 4/24/2009 8:01:28 PM
Nice bit of free verse.

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Synopsis
Your life neat and complete untold!
Published Date
4/29/2007 12:00:00 AM
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