HAIKU IN THE SKY
The clouds like cotton
The sky blue, like ocean waves
I love these nice days.

Comments:
 
Tony   Tony wrote
on 7/17/2008 8:03:14 AM
Well done, really a nice peice of work

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/5/2008 11:53:45 PM
Nicely done. Picturesque.

Mike Firesmith   Mike Firesmith wrote
on 5/5/2008 7:52:52 PM
I liked you bald. I don't do Haiku though.

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 5/5/2008 7:44:14 PM
I like this a lot. Great use of similes.

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this is a poem i wrote when i was outside in my back yard
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