Secret Love

  I once gave you a gold ring.
On it, I pledged my eternal love.
I placed it in a crystal box
so my love would never
be hidden from you.


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TongFengDeMao   TongFengDeMao wrote
on 10/15/2008 6:52:14 PM
I love the imagery of this one, but it feels incomplete to me.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 8/19/2008 12:43:50 AM
To me, this has a fairy tale like quality to it. I thought of a princess saying this to her prince. Hmmm....

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