Dark Winds

Dark winds,
secret lives;
danger lurks
in piercing eyes;
erupting power,
vocanic ire;
the Tiger walks
through fields of fire.


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TongFengDeMao   TongFengDeMao wrote
on 10/15/2008 7:34:25 PM
I like this, but I'm not sure what it's about, exactly. It leaves me wondering if it's about the tiger or if the tiger represents something/someone. And if it's the latter I wonder what/who. Perhaps that's your intent.

lanaia74   lanaia74 wrote
on 5/26/2008 7:29:06 AM
Short, sweet, and awesome!

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/22/2008 1:19:21 AM
Short and direct. I liked the last 2 lines in particular.

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