When our love comes undone
Look in my eyes
Rip out my heart
Kiss my lips
Tear me apart
lay beside me
And take my soul 
You rip me apart
As our love grows.

Right from the start
You said it was love
But we will grow closer
Or we will give up
On these feelings
We hide under our skin
Will we grow closer
Or give in.

Through your eyes
What do you see
Everytime
That you look at me
Do you see the person
Who has always loved
Or another lover
Ready to give up.

Noone but you knows me
And all that I am
Always and forever
please be my friend
Through everything we are
And that we shall become
be the one that I can turn to
When our love comes undone.

Comments:
 
scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 9/17/2009 12:10:47 AM
Thank you For the comment Sparrow, It is greatly Appreciated =)

miss_sparrow   miss_sparrow wrote
on 9/15/2009 9:00:13 AM
this is an amazing piece. the writing in the first paragraph is my favorite.

scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 5/18/2009 2:51:57 AM
=)

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/18/2009 1:28:34 AM
You know how to touch the heart for your words drip with emotion. I can feel for the man for I was once in his shoes.

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A poem about two people who are strongly in love but are slowly falling apart the guy wants the girl to be his friend for life no matter what happens.
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