Set Me Free
My eyes, they stream with tears
As I cry from emotionless fears
My heart, it skips one more beat
As I wish I had you here
In the end, I look in your eyes
And I see that you love me
But as I die, I kiss your lips
now babie, Set me free.

I shall fly, above the clouds
With the rain drops
Of drowning pains
When I look down to the earth
I want to see you smile again
I know that you have always loved me
And babie I still love you
And when I fade away with sorrow
Always believe its true.

So set me free, and let me go
Push me out of your heart
Forget all of our memories
And give love a new start
For now I'm gone
And you have set me free
I will always be here, its true
And every time you need someone
I am right here next to you.

Comments:
 
poetrydances   poetrydances wrote
on 6/21/2009 3:52:16 AM
Hi Steven Just to let you know that this poem has been featured on Poetrydances.com -as part of our agreement with writingroom.com (congratulations on the April contest result) Here's the link : http://www.poetrydances.com/wrwinnersforum.htm It is also shown in the poetry selections for this period- and it's also been listed in our current period Favorite Writer's area- along with your name. If you would like to see further work of yours linked on site- best to go to our poetry network- poetrydances.ning.com to do that- (To let you know also - our main site- shows on page one of all main search engines for many standard poetry related searches- so you should enjoy further exposure for your work.) Well done again Regards Tony. Poetrydances.

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