Mascara Hidden Screams

A beatin child
In a broken home
To scared to tell
Nobody knows.

Scars and bruises
Scrapes on her arms
A moment of truth
This has gone way to far.

The pain and the tears
Mascara hidden screams
Wanting to end this
Theres no way to leave.

One night of silence
And she thinks shes free
Her parents walk through the door
She then gets beat.

One bullet to end it all
Alot of courage is needed
She pulls the trigger
Her father starts bleeding.

Her mother now crying
She falls to her knees
An innocent child
Who used to get beat.

Now she lives life
Without any regrets
Two beautiful children
But with visions of death.

Now she lives freely
With a beautiful life
She has two beautiful children
And she is some lucky mans wife.


Comments:
 
scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 5/22/2010 11:17:13 AM
I write a lot of this kind of poetry i spill what i'm feeling into my poetry and that is what makes it so much better

sabrinaa_smiless   sabrinaa_smiless wrote
on 9/24/2009 9:44:06 PM
I like this one a lot. I wrote about a girl going through hard times, I'm not sure if I have it up..hmn. :]

scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 9/23/2009 4:02:14 AM
Thank you =)

Rinskinski   Rinskinski wrote
on 9/23/2009 3:58:57 AM
Well done! Many people have harsh upbringings like this; it's a sad fact of life. I really respect those who actually try to improve their lives, rather than the majority who seem to just sulk and feel sorry for themselves. It just goes to show that no matter what your circumstances, your life is in your own hands, not the hands of others, and it's up to you to change it for the better. Lucky she didn't get caught!

scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 9/23/2009 12:40:14 AM
Thank you, I have alot of friends who have went through things like this growing up, and have only recently had the nerve to tell someone, since then they have lived much better lives, noone deserves to be abused, and noone desrves to be belittled.

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A short poem about a young girl who used to get beatin until she takes a Violent stand, And now lives a free life
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