Drunk Driver
I was drunk
She was scared 
I was on the road
She was there
I turned my wheels
She turned her head
I struck her
She is not yet dead.

I stepped out
She lay limp 
I walked over
She tried to lift her head
I said Im sorry
She just cried
I repeat those words
She then died.

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scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 4/5/2009 3:02:15 PM
Thank you, Im glad to hear that you quit drinking and driving, Me and my mom were talking last night and what we were saying is very true, People who drink and drive may not be bad people, But it takes only that one stupid mistake to change their own life and someone else's, I just wish that the whole world would realize this.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 4/5/2009 4:27:25 AM
A simple and touching piece here. You gave her an ode here that cuts to the heart. And I agree with both of you in that drunk drivers don't care until it is too late. I now realize that from my own stupidity of doing this same thing. Luckily for me I did not hurt or kill anyone, and I quit before that happened. (See my poem "I Love My Freedom"

scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 4/4/2009 9:59:24 AM
yeah I know, the thing is the person who is drinking and driving seems as if they dont care what they do until its done and then their all like omg Im so sorry, Its lies. Thank you

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On April, 2, 09 My My friend Was tooking away by a drunk driver, I miss her so much, So i remebered that I had a poem written about a drunk driver, i decided to dig it out of my pile of poetry and post it, I hope this makes some people see some of the true horrors which come from drining and driving, I miss Elisha so much, She is in a better place and I hope shes happy. R.I.P Elisha, We all miss and love you <3
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