Always and Forever
Say goodbye to life
In your final hour
This life your leaving
Was both of ours
We took a commitment
To be together
When I said together
I meant forever.

Forever was short
Apposed to what it was
But I enjoy eternity
As I should
Because Im by your side
Until the end
I made a promise
To be your friend.

So now, when you leave
Never forget me
Look down on this earth
And think of the simplicity
think of us
And how things were
For I love you
Always and forever.

Comments:
 
scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 4/8/2009 8:14:25 PM
Thank you very much, I write alot of this sort of poetry, I really apprectiate the comment [=

Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 4/8/2009 7:18:13 PM
I definitely agree with both StarPoet and Doc. This is extremely sweet and sad, brings on that sort of smiling/crying kinda mood, you know. I enjoy your poems so far; I'm really glad you have more to show! :D

DocLivingston   DocLivingston wrote
on 3/28/2009 5:44:37 AM
Very touching, I can relate. You show sensitivity that can only be learned from experience. Please continue to share your thoughts and feelings. Take care, I care, doc

scooke2093   scooke2093 wrote
on 3/28/2009 12:59:44 AM
Thanks alot, I have a lot of poetry written, I just slowly put it on this site, so people can enjoy one at a time [=

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 3/28/2009 12:18:08 AM
I like the thoughts you wove into this. The point that this life was for the both of you. The promise you made to be a friend to the end. A true friend indeed you are. I hope you stick around and write more good poems like this one.

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This is a poem I wrote when I was feelign a little down.
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