My Last Nightmare
  
The shadows ever waking
Will never stop taking
My sleep from me

The night everlasting
And my dreams always casting
A dark memory over me

The moon rays cease 
The shadows prolong
While good dreams cease

Fear enwraps me in my rest
The dark groping at my chest
Until the point where it strangles me
To death...

Comments:
 
AshesofLilith   AshesofLilith wrote
on 5/4/2008 2:29:11 PM
Great piece; I have felt that which you describe, this is wonderful.

Mike Firesmith   Mike Firesmith wrote
on 5/4/2008 6:20:49 AM
Glas I read this early in the morning.

PMurphy   PMurphy wrote
on 5/3/2008 10:17:33 PM
wow, i truly do enjoy this piece. I love how you captured the feeling of death overcoming your dreams. It is almost as if the grim reaper is in your bed with you slowly grasping on your neck, and just as soon as your about to wake...... bam your dead. Truly enjoyable and i have no critism about it aswell "if you were looking for this". Great job

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Feel the fear, and do it anyway because even though it's not too late, one day, it will be.

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I just fixed this poem up a little form my other poem on another site.
Published Date
1/28/2007 12:00:00 AM
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