One Feeling

It is completely amazing.
That one feeling.
That inside chuckle.
That one look.
That one kiss.

Breath taking
and completely true.

Things I'd thought I'd only read in books.
That one feeling I did miss.
I didn't have the slightest clue,
That one person could make me feel,

So incredible
and unbelievably,

Sick to my stomach with sweetness.
Heartache disappeared.
Worry disappeared.
The jitters,
The sweaty palms,
That one feeling that excites and calms.

Complete comfort
.
It's all completely amazing.


Comments:
 
Synthetasthete   Synthetasthete wrote
on 5/29/2008 2:21:44 AM
That is so how I feel about my wonderful wife. She's the best.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/28/2008 11:43:35 PM
Beautiful feeling and flow. You reached deep inside for this one and it shows.

Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 5/28/2008 8:43:18 PM
Absolutely beautiful! Excellently written as well.

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The first feelings in a relationship are fun new exciting and amazing. This is my description.
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