emptiness
Emptiness is profound
More painful than death
Yet utterly painless

Your mind is chaos
but your heart is still
Frozen in fear

You want to speak
But no words come
Left stnding speechless

Vacant eyes
With no emotion
No thougths

Anything would suffice
Sadness, happienes,
Pain.

You want to smile
Want to be happy
But you can't

Anger should come
Despair should be felt
Too weak to feel it

I dont know
I am lost
I am empy

How to fix it
solve the problem
save myself

Who to turn to
Who to ask
Who will help

Tim is running out
I can't hold on
Minutes slip by

Emptiness overwhelms
Emptiness controls
Emptiness wins.

Comments:
 
KLHpensil   KLHpensil wrote
on 5/30/2010 1:56:12 PM
This is a beautiful description, it's shocking how spot-on it is. The emotion flows from it. A true piece of writing.

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