This afternoon with you. Haiku
whispering flowers-
silken colors of my love
can you hear them tell?


Copyright AC French
2009

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WandaLeaBrayton   WandaLeaBrayton wrote
on 5/7/2009 11:42:09 AM
Love certainly does have many colours, indeed. Some are soft pastels, others are bright and bold splashes...some are whispered, others shouted for all to hear. This is a lovely penning, Poet. Great power within brevity. Well done.

poetrydances   poetrydances wrote
on 4/21/2009 1:45:15 AM
Thanks so much BlueIris- I think I remember that too (only its very cloudy in my old brain!) Thanks Tony.

BlueIris   BlueIris wrote
on 4/21/2009 1:35:26 AM
I really like the first line. After thinking about it for a moment, although it has nothing to do with your poem, I remembered the singing and talking flowers from Alice in Wonderland.

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