Knowledge of us and me
 

Empty of light now-
the path I am to follow;
you are gone for good.


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BlueIris   BlueIris wrote
on 8/28/2008 2:29:59 PM
I like it. What do you think of changing the middle line to "the path that I must follow"?

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