Sometimes I Cry
I cry when I'm alone. I cry when I am sad. I cry when I think about. the dad I never had. I cry when I am happy. I cry when I am weak. My tears could fill an ocean. as they are rolling down my cheek. I cry when I awake. because I cry when I'm asleep. I cry just to cry. It seems all i do is weep. Can you see the tears? Will I ever heal? I dont cry because I'm soft. I cry because I'm REAL! My days are filled with sorrow. My past full of nothing but regret. This is why I get high. In hopes that I forget. I will cry for you. until my eyes can no longer see. When I am down and not around. Who will cry for me?

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Elton4562   Elton4562 wrote
on 1/27/2012 6:56:27 AM
I am guessing that you want your write to appear in poem form instead of in a paragraph. Are you typing it directly into the website? If so, create your document in Microsoft Word, copy it (Control-C) and then paste (Control-V) it into the Wrilting Room window. It should then appear in the proper format. I hope this works. If not, there are other things you can do. E-mail me at Elton4562@Yahoo if you need other suggestions. By the way, I think "Sometimes I Cry" is a terrific write. Elton

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