Waiting and Wishing

Waiting and Wishing

 

Sitting by the phone hoping it will ring

Praying for someone special to take me under his wing

If I call out his name will he come to me?

Or maybe I’ll just wait and let everything be

 

Will the sun shine tomorrow over our land

Hoping someone special will give me his hand

Sitting up all night wishing for him to see

Just how beautiful I am to some degree

 

Look for the beauty on the inside of life

When you find someone special make her your wife

Never look back and dwell on the past

Just make this one work and make it last

 

Look into my eyes for the love I have for you

Knowing it is perfect and always I’ll be true

Just give me one chance to prove my love

Watch for the heart singing like a dove

 

I’ll always be waiting for you by the door

To take me in your arms and give me more

Wishing it all would happen real soon

 Under the stars and the moon


Comments:
 
pamjo5291   pamjo5291 wrote
on 7/25/2010 10:02:34 AM
thank you so very much...I had a little trouble with that last line

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 7/24/2010 11:56:39 PM
I liked this a lot for I feel you rhymed this simply yet well, and those types of poems is what tends to be understood by more people. However, I have one suggestion. The very last line could be better. Maybe "Under the stars and the moon" or " Together forever for many a moon/many moons" Something that goes with the timeline words of the previous line ("Wishing it would happen real soon"). Still, very nice work!

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