unexplained thoughts
Have you ever been so scared
To think the worst
To no that you no your crazy
Worrying what your gonna do next
Well i do
Everyone seems to think im fine
Through all that i've been though
Like its hard you no
Like i have one person that knows the real me
So listen


I spend my days one by one thinking whats inside
I really dont no whats in store seems i wanna run and hide
So sometimes i stop and drift away
To find a better place
So i cant rest my face
And cry
Singing why why why
Singing why why why

My minds the battlefield and im losing the fight
Looking to find all the things that are right
Breaking down im losing it all
Taking my smallest step and my biggest fall
As i write songs to calm it all down
Trying to figure me out so i dont hit the ground
Asking
Why why why

I spend my days one by one thinking about whats inside
I really dont no whats in store seems i wanna run and hide
So sometimes i stop and drift away
To find a better place
So i can rest my face
And cry
Singing why why why
Singing why why why

So tell me what you think about me
Cause now i dont care
You can look at me all you want with that disapproved stare
Im doing this all for me im hiding the fear
A person like me no honest so rear
So i always worry about everyone else before i do me
Trying to find my place trying to see
Whats
Whats
Whats inside of me
So so so

I spend my days one by one thinking about whats inside
I really dont no whats in store seems i wanna run and hide
So sometimes i drift away
To find a better place
So i can rest my face
And cry
Singing why why why
Singing whyyyyyyyy






Comments:
 
Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 2/16/2009 4:38:09 PM
Here here, vwhitlock!! She is right to the core. And onlife2livevwr32 (wow that's a mouthful), it is so easy to fall in love with your songs. I really really really really wish you had an album or something, I'm sure you know I'd totally buy it. I can hear your stuff whenever I read it, it's so great. This has to be one of my favorites! "My mind's the battlefield and I'm losing the fight"... absolutely splendid, a very good metaphor to describe something like this. :D

vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 2/13/2009 7:46:49 PM
Great theme! We all have what I call our "counterfeit" self that we present to the world. We keep showing the forgery while we hide the original deep inside where noone can see and the amazing thing is everyone keeps buying it. Actually, we're shortchanging everyone 'cause a fake is never worth as much as the real thing. I think all the stuff that we try to hide is probably the best thing about us. It may be dark, it might be painful...but it's real and when we show someone who cares the things we are most vulnerable about...that's trust and damn, that's a good thing!

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