through me
You may look at me
 Thinking you can read me like a book
Can you really see
Think about it maybe you need a second look
To see that theirs more then what you see
Something thats great something thats me

I can see you trying
To see through me
I can see you trying
But theirs something you cant see
I can see you trying
But it wouldn't be You couldn't see
What makes me me

On the outside i may look mean
But theirs more then what is seen
Im so gentle and so nice
Shot from the gun ill be your sacrifice
I would take a bullet for anyone i no
But thats something you wouldn't think i would do
But you would no
Cause you can read me so good
But are you doing as you should

I can see you trying
To see through me
I can see you trying
But theirs something you cant see
I can see you trying
But it wouldn't be
You couldn't see
What makes me me

Hating cause i have tattoos
Wanna hurt me cause i like yoo hoos
Dont judge cause you dont no whats inside
While your family needs help
Look who ran and hide
While the good like me help we stand for are pride
From the day i was born
Till the day i die
Ill look to the sky
And ask why people like you are alive
I can see you trying to see through me
I can see you trying
But there something you cant see
I can see you trying
But it wouldn't be
You couldn't see
What makes me me
I can see
I can see
I can see you trying
Trying to see through me
Trying
Trying
Trying to see



Comments:
 
Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 2/16/2009 4:28:43 PM
Once again, nice job. And once again, try working on the spelling and stuff; stuff like 'are' instead of 'our'. I really get into your work, and it's kind of a jolt back to reality (for me) when I get confused for a second by a grammar mistake. Only if it's really noticable.... anyways, good job!

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