broken girl

Breaking ties
Telling lies
He's leaving the room
As a broken girl cries
He left her today
In a delicate way
Honey Im sorry
Was all he could say
And now
She just wants to get away

All alone a broken girl cries
As hes letting her go she will never survive
The night the terrible secrets it hides
Shes fading away and hoping she'll die
Tonight
She wishing she could fly

Drinking his wine
He acts so refined
With another lost girl
Hes a lil boy
Useing them as his toy
The girl from before
Knocks at the door
To catch them alone
She can't take anymore
And now
Shes wishing to die more and more

All alone a broken girl cries
As hes letting her go she will never survive
The nigh the terrible secrets it hides
Fading faster she goes now hoping she dies
Tonight
well end bad
this world has gotten to sad

Where did she go wrong now
What is there to say
Wasnt she a good lover
Why didnt he stay
The questions plague on
Theyre driving her mad
A knife to the wrists
Now isnt that sad

All alone the broken girl cried
He just let her go, she never survived
The night, the terrible secrets it hides
She faded away as her memories did die
Tonight
Is the end

Comments:
 
penname   penname wrote
on 1/21/2009 5:35:11 PM
love the form of this. also the tone and voice- excellent. gritty and profound. images - discomforting in a good way -makes an interesting and intriguing read. great work. thanks for sharing it

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