Think
Have you ever though
If earth was as small as a grape
If we looked to far
WE could go past the star
Go to another place
Filled with people
Filled with life
That maybe we aren't such a big planet
But a small star
As the other world sees us as
That we cant see them
They cant see you and me
Think how would that be
That should be lifes great mystery
As we discover new things everyday
That maybe someone lives the same way
A new world
A new place
A different race
A different face
Think
Think
Think


Comments:
 
Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 1/30/2009 2:35:37 PM
Here, here! I agree with penname.

penname   penname wrote
on 1/28/2009 8:55:57 PM
oh look at you and the fancy form. a fanciful poem to go with perfect (except the t...missing off of thought) I love the title. the last 9 lines are exceptional i love the concise-ness of the poem it is chalk full to insight.

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