The Killer
Its the posion that makes you loose
The ticking bomb you are the fuse
Its a choice you have choose
It blurs your sight
Makes you get into fights
A killer of its own
Makes your anger known
Happy one minute mad the next
Walking straight to cant walk
Stumbeling on words to cant talk
Brings out thoughts you had inside
All the mean things you try and hide
Each time is a roll of the dice
Never forget you cant live twice
Abuse comes with a price
Doesnt matter what you wear
The signs still show there everywhere
Death is a joke
Untill you croke
Dont abuse or you loss
Take it slow and safe
Its a killer and it comes fast
So be careful let the times last
Cause the killer is booze
So booze to much and pay the price
So take care protect your life






Comments:
 
SapphireCat   SapphireCat wrote
on 1/27/2009 6:46:26 AM
I really like this! Strong words and descriptions. Great job.

my_world_is_not_normal   my_world_is_not_normal wrote
on 1/26/2009 9:23:23 PM
OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH, i like it! It seems pretty tue to that! I like the word you used, you didnt use anything over and over again, i personally think thats annoying when you use the same words over and over again! So yeah very nice!

Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 1/26/2009 5:07:05 PM
Pretty nice. Once again, worded well, original and creatively presented.

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