Airborne


Sometimes I do not remember
History of the mind, of the body
I recount experiences in a haze
Their chronology in a heap.
Today is another matter
Frail bodies floated in the air
They were the essence of things
A fuselage is in the making
The yellow bird will soon take off
As we enter the sunset zone
Its elfish lightness will go down.
It will become a vaporous entity

Comments:
 
Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 1/30/2009 7:54:35 PM
heh-heh, no problem... well deserved!

nisheedhi   nisheedhi wrote
on 1/30/2009 6:07:36 PM
Thanks,moonrose

Moonrose   Moonrose wrote
on 1/30/2009 2:51:43 PM
I know, great job!! I dunno though, jamisvu, I might get ahold of nisheedi's brain first...

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 1/30/2009 7:59:28 AM
wonderful job with this write. Poem flowed so well and came alive with colorful language. Great job!

nisheedhi   nisheedhi wrote
on 1/29/2009 11:19:55 PM
Thanks ,jamisvu,the surgeon. Thanks,penname .

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Poetry based upon actual experiences, not one thought up in the intellectual aridness of a pseudo-thinker. Words as they mean in the specific context of recollected thought or image , not meaning several things at a time but that which re-creates an aura or a haze of an earlier experience.
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