Rain - An Etheree
 
Rain
The wet
And the cold
Sustains and strained
Winds screaming down through
Vacant lots of playtimes
Past and present, no one comes
The barking mongrels fight for rule
Over muddied mounds of buried bones
Strength takes victory and leaves there snarling

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lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 4/20/2008 1:09:09 AM
Wonderful imagery. Great flow.

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