Questioning the Dead
Do You know what's going on down here with me?
Do You even care about Earthly things at all?
When I slip and fall, do you still see?
Does my pain still show through Death's thick wall?

Do You know at all what goes on down here?
Do You remember the one You left behind?
Do the foibles and fiascoes of one once dear,
break through your dimension and relate to your kind?

Do You know what's happenening down here anymore?
Do You feel any emotion or just still dead air?
All the changes and terrors that come to my door;
do they touch You enough to call me there?

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lynda13   lynda13 wrote
on 9/21/2009 4:12:04 PM
From Lynda (author) I'm NOT reposting the same poems so many just times to get you all to re-read this trash. It's that I'm usually overmedicated and over alcoholated just to get up enough nerve to login here. Then I see all my stupid mistakes. I HAVE to fix them and don't know how to do it any other way. I'M SORRY. If you know another way I can edit my mistakes without reposting, I could use some friendly advice.. Be Brave... Contact Me. *I promise you I am not a poet-stalker*

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