Sex in the Suburbs

Thank God it’s Friday! A hell of a week it been. This is the one day of the week that Maria, Tameka, Tanya and I gather for our girl’s night out. Oh by the way, my name is Jasmine. I’m 24 years old, 5’8 and employed by one of the leading banks in the county. Keefe, my live in boyfriend, well I guess I’m the live in girlfriend, since the home we live in together belongs to him. He is also a successful business manager for HBO. Although we’ve been together for a few years the love I have for him just isn’t quite enough to satisfy my large appetite for men.

It’s Friday morning and I’m brushing my long dark hair and decide or a ponytail or curls, picking out what Victoria Secret lotion I want to lavish myself with and wondering how I’m gonna juggle my Friday night date and dinner with the girls. Yes, I said it, my date! I rose early on Monday and before I went to work I wondered into the motorcycle dealership. I was looking to purchase a new helmet for my Honda CBR600. As I stood in front of the helmets which were on display I heard a gentlemen say, “good morning, can I help you? I slowly turned to respond. “Yes, I’m looking for a hot pink helmet, do you have any”? As my eyes met his I was mesmerized. This man was gorgeous. He was about six foot one, his eye were light brown and his skin was smooth, as if he had his eight classes of water every day! He was a pretty chocolate brown with about two carats in each ear.  When he smiled I could almost count all of his pearly white teeth, but I was quickly distracted by his huge dimples on each side of his cheeks. His head was shiny bald and perfectly round. “Yes, we probably could order you one. Let me show you the cataloged.”  I slowly followed him to his desk and took a sit. I could tell by the sweat dripping from his head that he was thinking I was just as sexy as he was………… stay tune to hear about the exciting night and hot and sweaty event which almost cost Jasmine her relationship…


Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 11/18/2009 3:28:17 AM
A great start here. How many times a story like this has been lived. This may make many a man wonder about them girls night out. Hmmm......

GlennMcCrary   GlennMcCrary wrote
on 11/12/2009 7:02:01 PM
Graet word I thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

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Just something I'm working on. A true story, names have been changed. Ladies night out..
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