Revelation

The computer crashes

The car won't start

Its raining outside

The laundry is piling up

Everything is right



Bills keep coming and coming

Drama from the family circle

Need more money

Need more security

Everything is right



I need to loose weight

Lower my blood pressure

Give up ice cream and potatoes

No more soda or coffee

Everything is still right



All because I woke up beside you.


Comments:
 
Ezy_scorpio   Ezy_scorpio wrote
on 10/5/2011 11:37:49 PM
The punch line ruined everything otherwise, I was seeing me in your poem. Nice.

SUKIE   SUKIE wrote
on 10/22/2010 1:46:15 PM
You are covering here many aspects of my life in your poem and probably many others as well...Thank you for sharing this piece uplifting---SUKIE

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