Lost
Desperation, emptiness, loss, uncertainty
Disconnected, Out of control
Emotions, Feelings they consume all

Make you crazy and rationality is no more
Plans for the future out the window
No where to go

Grasping, reaching, praying for the wrong things
Dreaming, imagining what could have been
Living in the past only a prop in your life

Wasting time and its precious precious time
When will I wake from my nightmare?
Be able to open my eyes and see my life again

Looking for something, looking for someone
Too many choices too many souls lost
One and another promising to make it better

Can have one each day, but always longing
For the one who is lost, disappeared into the past
Reaching, grasping at this one and that

This is the darkness, the void in my life
Dangerous times when life can drop off the abyss
Be derailed and misguided to the wrong path

So pray for me, Say a spell for me, Rub a lucky charm
For I need all the help I can get to avoid Destruction, Madness
And Ciaos


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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 8/15/2010 12:20:16 AM
Your choice of words for this poem is excellent! They get your point across and express your emotion so well. You are a gifted and mad talented writer, from what I have read of your works. Keep up the great work!

OneVoice   OneVoice wrote
on 8/12/2010 7:48:29 PM
Very well stated!!! This is a very 'exacting' piece. Well done.

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