Feel

I don't think you could ever feel

What that felt like for me

Like a thief you had to steal

every last breath of life from me


You couldn't wait

as I hesitate

your an Ugly fake

now I'm full of hate


Stayed up all night until the dawn

But you treated me like a useless pawn

men to you were just a possession

as to me, you were my obsession


It could've been possible for us to be friends

but we needed your way until the end

Without you I'm so empty, I'm dead

But I honestly hope to not see you again


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StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/23/2009 1:14:21 AM
I like this for it's raw emotion. It is stark loathing and I think you told it well.

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