I’d Cry if I Could

 

When in the depths

And life is real

A sense of reality

I don’t know how to feel

I’d cry if I could

 

With my thoughts scattered

And my heart burning

Everything is tattered

And my soul is yearning

I’d cry if I could

 

When my mind floods

And escape I cannot

In my hand the buds

But what have I got

I’s cry if I could

 

When my face turns red

And my eyes start to swell

Not a tear can I shed

For this I know so well

I’d cry if I could


Comments:
 
Michele   Michele wrote
on 2/26/2009 10:14:49 PM
When you have time--read my "Release"--same theme.

Michele   Michele wrote
on 2/26/2009 10:13:45 PM
At the risk of originality--me likey!!!

poetrydances   poetrydances wrote
on 2/24/2009 11:03:51 PM
Hi Kathrine- This is Tony from Poetrydances.com Just to let you know as per our agreement with WritingRoom this great poem and your details have now been listed on our site- Here are the links: http://www.poetrydances.com/favoritewritersfebapr09.htm http://www.poetrydances.com/poetrydancesfebapr09.htm http://www.poetrydances.com/writingroomcompages.htm Congratulations on your poems success-! wishing you well. Regards. Tony

exquisite_still   exquisite_still wrote
on 2/19/2009 2:28:47 PM
Wow!you expressed having that numb feeling pain can sometimes give so well...good work!

SapphireCat   SapphireCat wrote
on 2/3/2009 6:31:23 PM
I LOVE your rhyme! Not to mention the content of your poetry. It's vivid and original. Me like ;)

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