Did I Appease You?

 

Did I fill the void within you

As you have done for me?

Make the grade, suit your fancy?

Did I entertain your mind with

Conversational good efforts to deliver

Our intentions as one?

Was I good enough to settle that hunger

Within your belly,

And quiet the ringing in your ears?

Didn’t I please you? Hit the spot?

You flattered me with your sweet use of words.

The look in your eyes, so serious.

You quenched my longing thirst

From your sweet thick lips.

And indulged in my one true fantasy.

I hope I fulfilled your wish…if not…

I hope I still can.

I want to make good on my promise

And capture your heart, and put delight

In your soul…Why?

Because you doused me with your words, and scent.

More importantly your smile.

Did I appease you? Bring you pleasure?

As you have done for me.

 


Comments:
 
WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/6/2009 2:48:45 AM
very artistic questions you got here:)

keilymason
Poetry
Free Verse
writing keilymason
Bookmark and Share

You must log in to rate.
This has not been rated.

© 2014 WritingRoom.com, LLC. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
WRITING | POETRY WRITING | CREATIVE WRITING | WRITE A BOOK | WRITING CONTESTS | WRITING TIPS