Rain as Tears

Rain as Tears

By: Kayla Meyers

 

Rain as tears to wash away our pain

Cleanses the spirit, keeps us sane

A solitary drop can mend our heart

To wipe the slate clean, allowing for a new start

 

Rain as tears to wash away our fears

Refreshes our eyes to see hope is still here

Helps us to look to a brand new day

Clears the path for an easier way

 

Rain as tears to wash away our strife

A momentary relief from the problems in life

After the rain the sun seems to shine even more bright

When the rainstorm is over everything will be right

 

Comments:
 
kayla97068   kayla97068 wrote
on 5/14/2008 4:16:26 PM
Thank you all very much!

Tony   Tony wrote
on 5/6/2008 7:07:49 PM
Very Good. It is a very good use of words.

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 5/6/2008 5:36:20 AM
I love this. It reminds me that there is always new hope in the new day!!

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/6/2008 4:39:46 AM
Very good. We all should remember that the rain serves more of a purpose than to just water the earth. Good work!!!

Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 5/6/2008 2:00:57 AM
Beautiful!

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There is a balance of life; for every positive there will be a negative, and with every negative soon will come a positive. If you hold on long enough through all the bad, you'll be able to find something wonderful and cherish it all that much more.
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Synopsis
A poem I wrote during a creative writing class on a rainy autumn day.
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