merge

you welcome the slow, deliberate
velocity of fingers thru your hair
tilting you back 

and all momentum gathers at
your lips, mine upon yours
in  a frenzy

we merge into each other
gradual, crushing force of glaciers

our flesh meld
inconsolable grasping 

so thoroughly i pass into you

i am
you(r) (be)com(ing)


Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 8/4/2008 12:59:25 AM
My favorite line is the same as Jazzcats. You rock, dude!

Jazzcat   Jazzcat wrote
on 8/2/2008 8:54:49 PM
Great stuff! I love the line: "gradual, crushing force of glaciers..." Very powerful and the ending was perfect. I love this piece.

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