A Sorrow Farwell
A sorrow farwell
 

Its so dark.
Why is it so dark?
I hate this place.
Can someone please save me?
There's no way out.
I m trapped.
HELP ME!
SAVE ME!

Save me from the end.
Save me from my enemy.
Save my from myself.

Its so dark
But at least now I know why.
You've been dragging me down for to long.
LET GO OF ME!
Please let go!

Its so dark.
And I m alone.
WAIT!
NO COMEBACK!

Its not to late.
You can still be saved.

Its so dark.
and I m alone.
I thought thats what I wanted.
To be let go of.
To be on my own,
By myself.
I really just wanted to be saved.
But now its to late.
Your gone,
and I m still trapped,
still alone.

Its so dark.
Can't you please just comeback to me?
COMEBACK!
PLEASE COMEBACK!
Please!

I need you .
I want you.
I miss you.
I m sorry.

But please..
COMEBACK!
I can't be alone anymore.
I was wrong.
I M SORRY!
I m so so sorry.

Comments:
 
SapphireCat   SapphireCat wrote
on 2/3/2009 10:50:18 AM
I usually hate it when writers put things in caps because it's distracting and the words don't need any more emphasis than they already have, but I actually liked your use of it here. Each time the bold words popped up I was like whoa! Intense! I'm sorry I don't have more to add, but I think it's great the way it is.

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