obscure
  If I could be someone else,
how great it would be.
not to have to live with myself.
to run,
to hide.
I need someone not like me!
someone totally diffrent then myself.
an obscure feeling of happiness filled me.
a life of another,
is what I seek.

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Ancient117331   Ancient117331 wrote
on 4/21/2008 2:23:19 PM
Jordii, Well milady, if you WERE another right now - I'd miss the person you are and the thoughts ou have expressed. Chris T.

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 4/19/2008 12:49:58 AM
You bring forth a lot of emotion with very few words--good job!

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