The Heart
 

For the heart speaks for itself.

It chooses it own.

It yearns for a passion

A passion of gold

It craves another

Another to share

the knowledge of wisdom .

The wisdom wise

The hearts of many,

Beat as one .

For all the heart wants is the love of the young.

The love that possesses true meaning

The love of a life with no ending.

The love of bond with no break.

The love of kind with no dare.



The heart is the unknown.

It leaps without knowing

It cares with no doubt

It hates with no reason

It loves throughout

The hearts true power lies within,

The love of life,

The life within.










































Comments:
 
StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 8/29/2008 12:19:35 AM
Not bad. I think you could clean it up just a little bit and make this a really good poem. I liked your thoughts about the heart. One that you may think about redoing is "the wisdom wise". We know wisdom is wise. Maybe something like "the wisdom of life/lives?" And "The love of A bond with no break?" And then the next sentence "To love with kindness and daring or to love so deep and so daring?" Just some friendly suggestions.

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