sanity's daydream
Kiss me I'm beautiful
Leave me I'm vain
How lucky am I
I'm no longer sane

I dance in the raindrops
twirl in the leaves
everyones envious
and wants to be me

I shine like the stars
sparkle like the snow
so radiant I'm told
I give off a glow

Some call me a liar
Some worship me by name
How lucky am I
I'm no longer sane

Comments:
 
vwhitlock   vwhitlock wrote
on 1/3/2009 7:31:26 PM
Loved it! Read it out loud twice...just rolls off the tongue!

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 12/22/2008 6:02:23 PM
I love your writes my friend. Easy reads that flows so well.

zaidsong   zaidsong wrote
on 10/6/2008 6:04:01 PM
Fabulous!!! Like I always say, sanity is nothing more than functional insanity. ;~)

BlueIris   BlueIris wrote
on 10/6/2008 10:50:09 AM
Unique.

G_Money   G_Money wrote
on 10/6/2008 8:44:07 AM
Very nice :) Well done

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