Diary of a used Porn Star
Hey look at me I used to be a model
Now I sit here holding a beer bottle

I used to be the center of attention
Now I suffer from water retention

I used to be completely desired
Now I carry my own spare tire

In the sun I used to bake
Now all I want is chocolate cake

Men used to buy me diamonds and gold
Now things just sag cause I'm getting old

Cute and sexy are no more
Thats what happens to a used up whore


Comments:
 
Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 12/22/2008 6:00:34 PM
lOVE THIS PIECE ALOT. I know you are not talking about yourself in this piece. Great write.

Warriorprincess55   Warriorprincess55 wrote
on 5/19/2008 8:29:46 AM
I loved this poem! It's exact and to the point, and it is great that you can write about it in this way. I ain't mad at you. It is what it is, and you've still got skills!

danicpa68   danicpa68 wrote
on 5/17/2008 5:26:22 AM
Very nicely written. It is so sad where we sometimes let life take us.

Pulelehua   Pulelehua wrote
on 5/5/2008 2:14:29 PM
Nice rhythm. Brings images to the mind thatso many of us can laugh about and sadness to the others who can relate. Thank you for putting a smile on my face today.

lindsay   lindsay wrote
on 4/13/2008 11:40:26 PM
giggle giggle

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