Dawns's Kiss
dawn’s kiss
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wake me with your languid stare
brushing like a dewy air
the dawn’s kiss has never been this soothing
lace me in your tousled hair
asphodel lips unprepared
daylight creeps across your cheeks; revealing

your face outlined
by the sunshine
that’s dripping quietly behind the blinds

wake me with a hushing glare
spilling brightly everywhere
your warmth is but a sweetened new morning
breathe in me your cooling breeze
freshly blowing memories
the dawn’s kiss has never been so lifting

your smile defines
the daybreak’s time
in watching this gold blushing sky unwind

and i felt the covers melt away
the chiming whispers of yesterday
and it’s you that’s the first thing I see
somehow you’re more restful than sleep

make this day begin again
return to the moment when
i opened my eyes to your slow breathing
chasing clouds all too often
moving past the uncertain
the dawn’s kiss has never been so calming

and it’s you that’s the first thing i’ll see

the sun’s shattered rays glitter in your gaze
rouse me into a new dream everyday


Comments:
 
ix   ix wrote
on 8/1/2009 2:17:52 PM
thank you very much, StarPoet. i guess i just woke up in a good mood.

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 7/28/2009 11:46:42 PM
Wonderfully told. The descriptions are to die for. You put some imagination into this and it shows.

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